Did you ever
Go to flip-out?
People bouncing
Guns shooting
Heads sweating.
It's exciting!
Did you ever
Go to inflatable world?
Air blowing
Inflatables bouncing
Backs sliding.
Come try it!
Thursday, November 26, 2020
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ReplyDeleteHello Leon! I love the way you used good verbs and I loved the way you did a very good job of summing it up. Next time you could add some pictures. What poem are you going to do next?
ReplyDeleteTravis
I will add more pictures next time, thanks
DeleteYour poems are exciting, Leon. I haven't been to flip-out. Where are the guns there? Inflatable World could use your poem as an advertisement, it's very descriptive. I look forward to reading your next poem.
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